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Yuanhuizi Yin

Miranda Marini

ENGL 1100 - 40

Nov. 28, 2018

EFFECTS OF LEGALIZATION OF MARIJUANA

Introduction

The recent legalization of bhang cannabis in the country has been received with different views from various stakeholders who are involved in running the country as well as the citizens. Being the second nation in the world to legalize the use of cannabis, the product is expected to bring different effects and the excitement of the use more impacting than the legislators have thought it. University students, for example, are among the lot that will be profoundly affected by the move because of the criticality of their age and choices in life. At this age, the majority of the students are not sure what they want in life and, hence, are easily swayed by common trends and influenced easily by their peers. Cannabis is known to have a variety of uses, which ranges from medicinal purposes, life, and religion to entertainment by people over a long period and the preference of use of the substance varies among different groups such as parents (Pearson et al. 83-89). The legalization of cannabis brings both benefits and effects which will be experienced due to the use by different groups. This discussion will explore how the legalization of marijuana will affect the lives of university students in Canada. Comment by Miranda: Lot of what? Comment by Miranda: What move? Comment by Miranda: Word choice

Benefits

Over a long period, Cannabis has been abused by college and university students while in hideouts and other unsafe places. Also, the methods of acquiring the drug for abuse were questionable and often resulted in the purchase of impure “weed” which is harmful and risky to their lives. The legalization of the drug will enhance the use of safe products because vendors will be licensed and expected to produce secure products, which are not a health hazard to the youth who use it. Due to the legalizing of the sale of the product, producers will have to ensure the quality of the marijuana product, which will consequently improve the quality and safety of the products (Moreno et al. 9-18). Most students feel that legal marijuana is safer and reduces the hustle of obtaining it which assures their health and lesser effects associated with the user as compared to the previous illegally acquired product. We all know the importance of good health as witnessed in our daily lives. Deaths, which were associated with the abuse of the substance and other shady deals to acquire and distribute the substance, are likely to reduce and, hence, provide a better environment for the students actually to learn. Safe and ample learning circles are now enhanced because drug-related insecurities are likely to drop significantly. Comment by Miranda: Cannabis shouldn’t be capitalised Comment by Miranda: What is the importance of this sentence?

Secondly, in the past , marijuana has been in the past used for medicinal purposes around the world. Cannabis has been tested and proved to increase appetite among people living with HIV/AIDS, relieves pain, helps with nausea and vomiting, treating neurological problems as well as relieving post-traumatic stress (Mathre 2). This is among the significant benefits of a bang when used for medicinal purposes, which are well known, but knowledge on the subject is limited due to prior legislation, which barred the growing and use of the plants together with its products. University students are known to suffer from various stressful conditions and traumas, which are generally associated with university education. It is an ordinary fete always to find students crying in hallways due to multiple reasons. The legalization of marijuana comes in handy for such students because, as a result, they may be able to get the help they require from the use of the plant as a drug. The fact that the drugs will be safe encourages most students who have been using the drug in secret to help with their conditions to come out in public and continue with the use where they once in while smoke or take some of it to help loosen up their minds and relieve the burdens they carry as they seek higher education (Mathre 10). Comment by Miranda: This should be at the beginning of your sentence. Comment by Miranda: Verb tense should match relieves and helps Comment by Miranda: See above comment Comment by Miranda: Word choice

Side effects

Marijuana, however, faces challenging issues which it brings along and is the primary cause for concern because, once abused, the drug can lead to severe adversities. To most people, marijuana use remains a mystery to them in their early years and regard it as unnecessary leisure, which can be avoided and feel like they can live without. According to a study conducted, there was an increasing trend in the use of marijuana in the United States from 2013. Data collected from 12th graders from the year 1976 to 2015 showed that they had not used the drug at any time. However, the trend changed from 2013 where college students started increasingly taking the substance (Miech et al. 996-1002). This change in the trend shows how the legalization of marijuana affects its use in that people start increasingly abusing the drug. The same case is expected for Canadiana university students because they are now able to access and use the drug at will hence will develop the sense of curiosity and increased want to abuse it. Therefore, the legalization will not only increase the use but also the number of active users who abuse it as a result of ease of obtaining it and freedom to use (Miech et al. 998). Comment by Miranda: Significance? Comment by Miranda: In-text citation Comment by Miranda: In-text citation Comment by Miranda: When Comment by Miranda: Awkward wording Comment by Miranda: Awkward wording

The use of marijuana impairs judgment and several psychomotor skills which are necessary for the body (Fischer et al. 180). While driving, it is essential for one to be keen and have good reflexes which enables them to adequately use the road to ensure their safety and that of other road users. In a study conducted in Toronto College, students who drive four hours after using marijuana had lapses which were dangerous and could cause accidents if not cautious enough. Opening windows, drinking alcohol, playing loud music and eating before and during driving are all associated with marijuana because the drivers assume that through this methods they can reduce the effects of the substance (Fischer et al. 185). However, this is a brew for more troubles because they don’t reduce the effects but expose the users to more risk of accidents because they are not attentive to the road. With the authorization of the substance in Canada, the cases of such accidents are expected to skyrocket because it’s legal to smoke or abuse the substance. Comment by Miranda: In-text citation Comment by Miranda: Unclear. Do you mean that opening windows, drinking alcohol, playing music, and eating are all related to distracted driving? Or do you mean that people hope that these things will make them more aware while driving after having smoked marijuana?

Furthermore, despite having several health benefits, marijuana has numerous side effects which result from the prolonged abuse. Firstly, marijuana contains tar and other carbons which are contained in the smoke. When smoked for long periods of time, it forms a layer of black substance along the lungs and nose which could eventually block the lungs hence death (Volkow et al. 2219-2227). Also, the tar is a dangerous substance, which is known to cause carcinogenic reactions which results to activation if cancerous cells and thus the development of different types of cancers such as lung cancer. Secondly, it leads to cognitive effects which include to loss of the ability plan, make decisions as well as control different impulses (Volkow et al. 2219-2227). This is a serious condition which could lead to a subsequent decline in memory and other mental disabilities. The authorization of the use of the drug exposes students to these risks and could even affect their ability to concentrate in class. Comment by Miranda: In-text citation Comment by Miranda: In-text citation

Moreover, the use of marijuana is often accompanied by the abuse of other drugs. Studies show that marijuana users are chronic alcoholics (Kerr et al. 1992-2001). In a study conducted at Oregon College, after the legalization of recreational marijuana, the use doubled, and the abuse of other drugs was also experienced. The study conducted included 110,924 undergraduate students who were either users or non-users. The study found out that heavy marijuana users were also alcohol users and that the legalization was among the significant factors which led to the increased use of the drug. The rates in the college increased more than the other states which show the change in policy about the drug was the crucial determinant of the use (Kerr et al. 1992-2001). This can be likened to the case of the legalization of recreational marijuana in Canada because most teens and youth have the same behavior and are expected to behave equally likely. It shows the abuse of the drug will increase as well as the inevitable abuse of other drugs such as alcohol and tobacco with its products in a short period. Comment by Miranda: In-text citaiton Comment by Miranda: In-text citation

Conclusion

The abuse of the substance is a very vital topic in the ensuring of growth and protection of the future of the youth and the country at large. Continued abuse of these substances has been tried, tested and proved to be harmful than helpful to most people. University students often lack the right guide in choosing between what is right and what is wrong. At times, more than just moral support is needed to ensure that they are safe and make sound decisions for their future. Despite the legalization, the government should put in measures to shield innocent people from this practice and ensure that lesser people are forced into the abuse of these substances. Actions such as banning of the use of the drug within school premises and playgrounds to shield the innocent bystanders who are at times lured to abusing of the substances.

In your thesis, you say that you would like to discuss how marijuana will affect students, and while you have started out on a strong note, your thesis gets lost in the second part of your essay (side effects)

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