Persuasion Essay

Tika Adhikari Campus Racism 101 10 /10 !

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You have written a good rough draft. However, I would like to see you alter your use of "Kim." Instead of referring to Kim throughout the essay, you should reserve the specific example to support a specific piece of evidence. When you are explaining your proposal for success, you can direct it to "students." Let me know if you have any questions.

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