Research Paper and Works Cited Page

These are the comments I got from my instructor

Hello Oluwayoyin,

Revise the essay for a complete and precise thesis.

Bring the content in sync with the main idea.

Focus on the summary of a body paragraph that ends with a citation.

Also, work on the punctuation and formatting errors to make the writing smoother.

Cite the documents in the MLA format precisely.

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1. For the thesis of this assignment, you need to state your claim about human resource management along with three valid reasons. 

2. Consider framing the thesis as: I believe, compensation and social benefit leads to employee retention and good performance because reason 1, reason 2, and reason 3. 

3. These supporting points will make the thesis complete.

4. replace "and" with "that are" available immediately; while on the other hand,

5. Identify the main points to be discussed in the body of the essay. As per the thesis, you need only three supporting reasons for your claim. You need not use too many reasons here as this makes the writing lengthy. 

6. incorrect capitalization

7. Works Cited

8. Cite the documents in the MLA format precisely.