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Feedback on FIRST ROUGH DRAFT

15 pages, required 30-40 pages, increase sources/References from 6 to the 24 sources/references approved for AB (students need to increase pages and use All approved sources), the title need to be corrected to format of APPENDIX 1 of EOP, add  copyright page Appendix 2, Add Abstract Title page Appendix 5, no running heads on Title page nor numbers or Roman numeral, begin running heads on the Copyright page, begin with roman numeral II, on Copyright page, remove Abstract from Table of Content and correct entire format of TABLE OF CONTENT to that of APPENDIX 6, remove Subsections from under Introduction in Table of Content, Introduction begins page 1, add Methodology, and Results then develop with Subsections,  under Section of TABLE OF CONTENT, and in the LTR in Document, develop the Methodology and Result Section including Subheadings in TABLE of Content and Document, move the Conclusion to Level 2 position to left margin  (see highlighted and APA 7th edition). After paper is further developed (see Appendixes 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6 of EOP regarding the pages to add, Major and Subsection in Table of Content  and Document). Paper  will be read over (Second Rough Draft for further errors and corrections).   Make adjustments and corrections; after, keep up the great work!

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Dr. Gregory

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PLEASE USE ALL APPROVED SOURCES THAT I GAVE YOU FOR ASSIGNMENT. I MESSED UP AND DID NOT TELL YOU TO WRITE ENOUGH PAGES, SO THAT WAS MY FAULT. ADD AT LEAST 20-25 MORE PAGES TO THIS ASSIGNMENT. I WILL SEND YOU THE REFERENCES AGAIN THAT YOU MUST USE FOR THIS ASSIGNMENT THAT WERE APPROVED BY THE INSTRUCTOR.