OM010 Health care Administration Masters Level

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You're very close in on the right path, however you need to expand a few areas. See my comments on the markup and the rubric. Especially the timeline, you need to be more specific. Your cost estimate also was inaccurate and incomplete. I highly recommend you review the rubric thoroughly. In order to pass this paper, you would need a 3 on every section as explained in the rubric. Do more research into the cost estimates of electronic health record system implementation and include citation.

Learning Objective 1.1: Explain core functions of a healthcare information system.:

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Response explains four core functions of the healthcare information system. Response accurately explains the impact of the core functions have on the organization.

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Learning Objective 1.2: Explain legal and regulatory requirements for implementing the healthcare information system.:

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Response identifies three legal and regulatory requirements to be considered when implementing the healthcare information system. Response explains the relevance of these requirements.

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Learning Objective 1.3: Summarize the value of the healthcare information system to an organization.:

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Response describes one value of the healthcare information system related to quality, outcomes, and safety. Response describes one value of the healthcare information system related to improved efficiency and cost reduction. Response describes one value of the healthcare information system related to improved service and satisfaction.

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Learning Objective 1.4: Summarize functionality of the healthcare information system.:

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Response describes three functions of the healthcare information system that are particularly relevant to the organization. Response provides rationale for highlighting these three functions to the organization.

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Learning Objective 1.5: Evaluate the proposed healthcare information system against systems currently in place in an organization.:

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Response accurately evaluates how the healthcare information system alignments with other organizations within a healthcare system.

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Learning Objective 2.1: Analyze areas of concern in implementing the health information system.:

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Response analyzes three areas of concern in implementing the health information system in the organization. Response provides rationale for highlighting each of these areas of concern.

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Learning Objective 2.2: Analyze key points to consider in evaluation of the health information system.:

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Response identifies three major points to consider in evaluating health information system once it is implemented. Response provides rationale for each point.

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Learning Objective 3.1: Explain how the health information system is compatible to the organization’s mission, goals, and values.:

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Response provides at least three clear ways the health information system is compatible to the organization’s mission, goals, and values.

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Learning Objective 4.1: Evaluate core functions of the healthcare information system.:

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Fewer than six key core functions are identified. Explanation of the value and impact of the core functions to the organization is insufficient and/or inaccurate.

I'm not seeing a strong comparison here, you needed to compare your chosen system to a nether existing system and compare at least six core functions of each system. Do this in the paper and title it comparison of two different systems and explain the differences between the core functions of the two different systems. Make sure you list and describe at least six core functions

Learning Objective 4.2: Evaluate usability factors of the healthcare information system.:

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Response identifies at least four usability factors that were addressed with the vendor. Response explains why these usability factors were selected for vendor discussion. Response explains the feedback received from the vendor on the usability factor queries.

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Learning Objective 4.3: Recommend strategies for evaluating the healthcare information system usability.:

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Response provides five strategies used for evaluating the healthcare information system usability in the organization. Response provides research-based rationale for each strategy. Response is supported by relevant academic/professional resources.

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Learning Objective 4.4: Explain how the healthcare information system will integrate with other products.:

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Response describes products within the organization that will integrate with the recommended healthcare information system.

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Learning Objective 4.5: Explain how the healthcare information system ensures absolute privacy and security.:

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Response describes fewer than three safeguards.

Additional Comments: See my comments on the mark up for this one

Learning Objective 4.6: Describe the healthcare information system vendor support to an organization.:

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Response describes fewer than four areas of support provided by the vendor. Rationale is insufficient.

Additional Comments: See comments on mark up - you need to expand on this more it was too vague and general

Learning Objective 4.7: Evaluate vendor stability.:

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Response provides data that indicates the vendor is stable and reliable. Response provides data addressing customer satisfaction. Response provides the names of three comparable organizations that implemented the healthcare information system from this vendor.

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Learning Objective 4.8: Provide cost estimate of the healthcare information system.:

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Cost estimate is not in alignment with healthcare information system features and functions described.

Additional Comments: Additional Comments: See comments on mark up - you need to expand on this more it was too vague and general 

Learning Objective 5.1 Develop a timeline for the selection and acquisition of a health information technology.:

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Timeline for the selection and acquisition of a health information system describes less than four steps in the system and how the steps would be accomplished.

Additional Comments: Additional Comments: See comments on mark up - you need to expand on this more it was too vague and general 

Written Communication PS 1.1: Use proper grammar, spelling, and mechanics.:

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Writing reflects competent use of standard edited American English. Errors in grammar, spelling, and/or mechanics do not negatively impact readability.

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Written Communication PS 1.2: Organize writing to enhance clarity.:

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Writing is generally well-organized. Introductions, transitions, and conclusions provide continuity and a logical progression of ideas.

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Written Communication PS 1.3: Apply APA style to written work.:

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APA conventions for attribution of sources, structure, formatting, etc., are generally applied correctly in most instances. Sources are generally cited appropriately and accurately.

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Written Communication PS 1.4: Use appropriate vocabulary and tone for the audience and purpose.:

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Vocabulary and tone are generally appropriate for the audience and support communication of key concepts.

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Critical Thinking PS 5.1: Analyze assumptions and fallacies.:

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Response generally assesses the reasonableness of assumptions in a given argument. Response identifies and discusses the implications of fallacies and/or logical weaknesses in a given argument.

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Critical Thinking PS 5.2: Generate reasonable and appropriate assumptions.:

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Response presents and discusses key assumptions in an original argument.

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Critical Thinking PS 5.3: Assess multiple perspectives and alternatives.:

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Response identifies and considers multiple perspectives and alternatives.

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Critical Thinking PS 5.4: Use problem-solving skills.:

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Response presents solutions that are practical and work in addressing the specific problem.

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Information Literacy PS 6.1: Identify credible sources.:

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Most sources are credible, appropriate, and relevant to the topic.

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Information Literacy PS 6.2: Analyze findings from relevant sources.:

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Analysis clearly reflects relevance of findings to the identified problem, issue, or purpose.

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