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I'm intrigued by this dynamic. It reminds me of other stories I've read and seen, but I'm excited to see your take on the whole thing. 

One cautionary note: I know that this type of conflict is typical of this era, but I worry that the daughter is simply the prize to be won in both scenarios. Either she's the approved suitor's prize or she runs off with her unapproved suitor and her father has lost all hope and suffers financial ruin. That seems like a lot to put on a character who doesn't seem to have much agency in the story. How might you heighten her role in the story and modernize some of these themes?