Identify Resources to be Used in the Literature Review
revenant33
feedbackfromweek3.docxDear Student
This paper is backsliding, where you have changed aspects of the paper that do not follow guidance and feedback I gave you that led to your proposal being approved.
You cannot change the problem, purpose, intent, research question, hypothesis, and data collection/analysis plan now that the proposal is approved.
In your proposal in the objective section, you mentioned “This study will compare mishap rates for the MQ-8B Fire Scout and the human operated MH-60 Sea Hawk in such instances. As such, the analysis will evaluate which between manned aircraft and UAVs are the most effective in timely provision of humanitarian aid during natural disasters as a means of preventing loss of human lives.” You need to focus on this issue.
Also, in the Scope section you mentioned “The research will be in reference to the rates of mishaps of the MQ-8B compared to the MH-60” that’s good topic, continue on that subject as well.
Make the changes required in your Chapter 1 so it reflects the approved elements from your proposal. There are typos and grammar errors throughout. Proofread and correct. Paragraphs should be 3-7 sentences. You took out the explicit problem statement.!!
You have changed one research question into a "yes/no" question.
Your literature review is ok, but will need expansion to ensure you have covered all of the program outcome areas and your specialization(s). You need to cover Aviation Aerospace Safety systems & Unmanned Aerospace Systems into your literature review paper.
Make sure to develop your lit review to include those elements from your program outcomes that you may have missed.
In week 4's submission, you need to demonstrate exactly your data collection, analysis, statistical test, and conclusion on your hypothesis.
