Brainstorming #2

Feedback from the journal assignment:

Very well done! I do recommend using first and second level headings in your paper. It helps the reader identify the next topic to be covered and is the next step in writing a scholarly paper. CONTENT:  You have provided a summary of the directional strategies and identified the strategic alternatives of the Asian Health Services case study. The examples from the case study convey your ability to apply the strategic management concepts. In addition, you were able to show the connection to the organization’s mission, vision, and values (MVV). Your evaluation of the implementation of the directional strategies as well as the alternatives was accurate in depicting the MVV’s outlined by the organization. Great use of resources to support your work! READABILITY: You followed grammar, spelling, and sentence structure rules. MECHANICS: Your work followed APA guidelines outlined in the instructions. RECOMMENDATIONS:  Please review the grading rubric as it illustrates your compliance with the grading criteria. As an FYI, the Academic Support module in our course is available to support your academic success. Resources include written feedback, coaching, and/or tutoring, as well as self-led supports to strengthen writing skills. Access Academic Support by clicking on the Academic Support tile on the course homepage in Brightspace, or from the Course Menu, click Learning Modules, then locate the Academic Support module listed at the bottom of the Table of Contents. Overall, you have met the objectives for the Assignment. If you have any questions, feel free to contact me. I am always happy to help.

Feedback from the final assignment:

Great job - very well written. You developed a thorough analysis of Asian Health Services’ strategic planning approaches and were able to give some insight by providing examples. You accurately identified the prevailing issue of retaining physicians and lack of funding as well as your evaluation of their effect on the organization. In addition, the healthcare manager’s role was well developed in determining their contribution to the planning process for addressing these issues. The rationale provided was sound and illustrated your ability to apply the concepts of strategic management in leadership roles. The piece on the key stakeholders and the part they play in the process was well defined. Nicely done!  READABILITY: You followed grammar, spelling, and sentence structure rules. WRITING MECHANICS: You provided APA formatted citations and references as directed. I look forward to your next milestone installment for your final project. RECOMMENDATIONS:  Please review the grading rubric as it illustrates your compliance with the grading criteria. The Academic Support module in our course is available to support your academic success. Resources include written feedback, coaching, and/or tutoring, as well as self-led supports to strengthen writing skills. Access Academic Support by clicking on the Academic Support tile on the course homepage in Brightspace, or from the Course Menu, click Learning Modules, then locate the Academic Support module listed at the bottom of the Table of Contents. Overall, you have met the objectives for the assignment. Well done!