DBA 701 - 3.3
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Feedbackfrompeer.docxBlog Peer Review
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Employee Diversity and Equality Blog Post |
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Instructions:
1. Complete this review form in its entirety.
2. Mark “Met” or “Not Yet” for the criteria.
3. Provide specific feedback related to the rubric criteria.
4. Identify areas of strength and areas for improvement.
Note: Your feedback should incorporate the tips recommended in Moxley’s (n.d.) article, Provide Feedback to Others.
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Not Yet |
Feedback |
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Audience The author shows evidence of consideration for the audience and the topic is mostly relevant.
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More evidence is needed regarding employee diversity. The author could have discussed how the employees in an organization can be classified according to their Ethnicity, Age, Education, Income, Skills and Upbringings and subjected to unequal treatments in the workplace. |
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Headline The headline captures the audience's attention and is related to the blog content.
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The specific industry or government organization or country is required to be mentioned in the heading. |
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Opening The opening is compelling, and the reader is likely to continue reading.
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The introduction is adequate. |
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Format The blog post is scannable and digestible. Most content is purposefully formatted but may contain distracting elements. Some attempt has been made to make the content accessible.
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The content is easily accessible. |
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Visuals Use of images and visual spacing is intentional, follows consistent formatting, and adds to the flow and appeal of the blog.
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No image is used in the blog. It is suggested to use a few images related to the topic which will make the blog more interesting to read. |
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Data Data is used correctly, aligns with the topic of the blog, and adds greater depth or interest to the subject.
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No data is used in the blog. Many authors are having difficulty persuading others to go past the headline and share the articles. Not every blog article is accepted equally. Some articles are very successful, while others fail miserably. The blog post with data will boost reader engagement. |
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Communication Communication is understandable. Communicates clearly through the control of grammar and diction, with only minimal errors.
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The author has clearly expressed his/her views. |
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APA Formatting Blog is formatted according to APA style. Source citations and references are used correctly and most follow APA form & style.
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The blog is not aligned according to APA Style. As per APA Style, The blog must me left aligned. But the author chose justified alignment for the blog. The references are properly cited. The author could have used a few more references. |
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Areas of Strength |
Language, sentence construction. |
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Areas for Improvement |
The author could have included Introduction, subheadings, and a conclusion. |
