peter

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Hello Justina,

Following our tutorial here are a few brief notes for you.

 

JS Mill – not an ‘ancient’ philosopher

Scorates – would not have discussed charging students for learning – so change this section

Direct quotes – page numbers needed

Furedi – well known for writing from a strong left-wing perspective – so need to mention this rather than saying he is unbiased.

Go into detail and explain more, for example, this sentence, as an example, needs further explanation “It is all based on the pedagogical relationship level of care between the teacher, the professional, and the student (Love, 2008).”

You should explore chapter 1 only written by Frank Furedi in wider literature of knowledge 

Complexity theory – explain more about this and how it leads to universities monetizing their services.

Use more references throughout your work.

Use the ‘so what’? question to identify if your work is critical or descriptive.

Who is Athens- not clear who Athens is( Put some explanation )and also include in your reference

Reference your first paragraph

Who is paid Teacher? (Not sure what that word is)

There should be a bit more argument, A more explanation about the resource funding

For the reflective thinking which is the second assignment. Reflect using one of the models e.g critical dogmatism transcendental or deconstructionism argument