HSA5200CBE Section 01CBE Healthcare Policy, Ethics, and Laws (11 Weeks) - CBE - 2021 Fall Quarter Deliverable 4 - Case Analysis Involving Medical Ethics Using IRAC Method Deliverable 4 - Case Analysis Involving Medical Ethics Using IRAC Method
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11/2/21, 11:28 AM
Jennifer,
Thank you for your 2nd attempt. I am going to ask that you set-up a time to speak with Dr. Point about the deliverable submissions and requirements. While the issue is in the form of a question, it is grammatically incorrect and does not fully comprehend the ethical issue. Please ensure that you are listening to the live sessions and truly taking heed to the information and requirements. Additionally, please review the rubric. The analysis does not have any legal principles from other sources. Why was the rule established? Which laws were used in the ruling? These are items that should be included in the analysis. Again, there is an opportunity to do more research and provide more legal analysis.
I also want to suggest that you use Grammarly for future assignments. Grammarly is a free tool that you can obtain through the tools/resources section of this course. It reviews your paper and provides grammatical and spelling suggestions.
Below is information from your 1st attempt:
Jennifer,
Thanks for your 1st attempt at deliverable 4. This was a good start. You provided good overall information on the issue, rule, analysis, and conclusion. Please do not get discouraged by the grade as there are a few quick fixes. Ensure that you are taking heed to the rubric and live session. The issue should be in the form of a question. In the introduction, please start with strong information with supporting details (citations) about the importance of legal oversight and concepts. There were some grammatical errors throughout and the opportunity to provide more information from your research.You can click within the paper to see my comments. Additionally, please click on the rubric and see my specific feedback for each criterion.
Dr. Joy
