organizational/ industrial assignment

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Hello Sylvie, this was a commendable effort at Identifying the threats, risks, and vulnerabilities across your organization.  Your description of the nature of the threat was good.  I thought your discussion of the risk in terms of the likelihood of occurrence and impact was also commendable.  Good job highlighting areas that should be improved from a technology perspective, a people perspective, and a policy perspective. Do not neglect to discuss the potential risks associated with maintaining the current security posture.  Also, pay attention to page limitation in each assignment.  In practice, your boss will not look favorably on your work if you disregard the guidelines provided for the project.  Great work on this step.

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Hello Sylvie: This was a decent effort.  While your summary was attentive to each element of the assignment, it was a far too long.  This assignment called for three pages, not counting the cover sheet and references.  Make a greater effort to stay with the page limits called for.  I appreciated the effort to cite to the readings to support your work.  Give some thought about how you might present this information within the context of the organization/industry you were assigned. One way to do that is by using industry-specific examples.  Redo and submit a shorter document, please