Assignment 5 Due 12/8/18 Saturday 11PM EST
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FeedbackforAssignment3part2tousewithAssignment5.docxName: BUS599 Week 8 Assignment 3 Part 2: Business Plan – Draft
Description: BUS599 Week 8 Assignment 3 Part 2: Business Plan – Draft
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Unacceptable 0 - 69% F |
Fair 70 - 79% C |
Proficient 80 - 89% B |
Exemplary 90 - 100% A |
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BUS599-A3-1 1a. Revise the Company Description (Mini Project Deliverable 1) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points Range:0 (0%) - 1.45 (4.83%) Did not submit or incompletely revised the Company Description (Mini Project Deliverable 1) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points Range:1.47 (4.9%) - 1.66 (5.53%) Partially revised the Company Description (Mini Project Deliverable 1) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points Range:1.68 (5.6%) - 1.87 (6.23%) Satisfactorily revised the Company Description (Mini Project Deliverable 1) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points:1.89 (6.3%) Points Range:1.89 (6.3%) - 2.1 (7%) Thoroughly revised the Company Description (Mini Project Deliverable 1) section based on the feedback you have received. |
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BUS599-A3-2 1b. Revise the Industry Analysis and Trends (Project Deliverable 1) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points Range:0 (0%) - 1.45 (4.83%) Did not submit or incompletely revised the Industry Analysis and Trends (Project Deliverable 1) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points Range:1.47 (4.9%) - 1.66 (5.53%) Partially revised the Industry Analysis and Trends (Project Deliverable 1) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points Range:1.68 (5.6%) - 1.87 (6.23%) Satisfactorily revised the Industry Analysis and Trends (Project Deliverable 1) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points:2.1 (7%) Points Range:1.89 (6.3%) - 2.1 (7%) Thoroughly revised the Industry Analysis and Trends (Project Deliverable 1) section based on the feedback you have received. |
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BUS599-A3-3 1c. Revise the Strategic Position & Risk Assessment (Project Deliverable 1) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points Range:0 (0%) - 1.45 (4.83%) Did not submit or incompletely revised the Strategic Position & Risk Assessment (Project Deliverable 1) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points Range:1.47 (4.9%) - 1.66 (5.53%) Partially revised the Strategic Position & Risk Assessment (Project Deliverable 1) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points Range:1.68 (5.6%) - 1.87 (6.23%) Satisfactorily revised the Strategic Position & Risk Assessment (Project Deliverable 1) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points:2.1 (7%) Points Range:1.89 (6.3%) - 2.1 (7%) Thoroughly revised the Strategic Position & Risk Assessment (Project Deliverable 1) section based on the feedback you have received. |
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BUS599-A3-4 1d. Revise the Target Market (Project Deliverable 2) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points Range:0 (0%) - 1.45 (4.83%) Did not submit or incompletely revised the Target Market (Project Deliverable 2) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points Range:1.47 (4.9%) - 1.66 (5.53%) Partially revised the Target Market (Project Deliverable 2) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points Range:1.68 (5.6%) - 1.87 (6.23%) Satisfactorily revised the Target Market (Project Deliverable 2) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points:1.89 (6.3%) Points Range:1.89 (6.3%) - 2.1 (7%) Thoroughly revised the Target Market (Project Deliverable 2) section based on the feedback you have received. |
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BUS599-A3-5 1e. Revise the Competition (Project Deliverable 2) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points Range:0 (0%) - 1.45 (4.83%) Did not submit or incompletely revised the Competition (Project Deliverable 2) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points Range:1.47 (4.9%) - 1.66 (5.53%) Partially revised the Competition (Project Deliverable 2) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points Range:1.68 (5.6%) - 1.87 (6.23%) Satisfactorily revised the Competition (Project Deliverable 2) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points:1.89 (6.3%) Points Range:1.89 (6.3%) - 2.1 (7%) Thoroughly revised the Competition (Project Deliverable 2) section based on the feedback you have received. |
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BUS599-A3-6 1f. Revise the Marketing Plan & Sales Strategy (Project Deliverable 2) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points Range:0 (0%) - 1.45 (4.83%) Did not submit or incompletely revised the Marketing Plan & Sales Strategy (Project Deliverable 2) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points Range:1.47 (4.9%) - 1.66 (5.53%) Partially revised the Marketing Plan & Sales Strategy (Project Deliverable 2) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points Range:1.68 (5.6%) - 1.87 (6.23%) Satisfactorily revised the Marketing Plan & Sales Strategy (Project Deliverable 2) section based on the feedback you have received. |
Points:1.89 (6.3%) Points Range:1.89 (6.3%) - 2.1 (7%) Thoroughly revised the Marketing Plan & Sales Strategy (Project Deliverable 2) section based on the feedback you have received. |
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BUS599-A3-7 2a. Describe the ways in which your company is committed to being a good corporate citizen. |
Points Range:0 (0%) - 1.45 (4.83%) Did not submit or incompletely described the ways in which your company is committed to being a good corporate citizen. |
Points Range:1.47 (4.9%) - 1.66 (5.53%) Partially described the ways in which your company is committed to being a good corporate citizen. |
Points Range:1.68 (5.6%) - 1.87 (6.23%) Satisfactorily described the ways in which your company is committed to being a good corporate citizen. |
Points:2.1 (7%) Points Range:1.89 (6.3%) - 2.1 (7%) Thoroughly described the ways in which your company is committed to being a good corporate citizen. |
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BUS599-A3-8 2b. Discuss how your company’s activities will affect the environment and identify the steps you will take to mitigate any negative impacts. |
Points Range:0 (0%) - 1.45 (4.83%) Did not submit or incompletely discussed how your company’s activities will affect the environment and did not submit or incompletely identified the steps you will take to mitigate any negative impacts. |
Points Range:1.47 (4.9%) - 1.66 (5.53%) Partially discussed how your company’s activities will affect the environment and did not submit or incompletely identified the steps you will take to mitigate any negative impacts. |
Points Range:1.68 (5.6%) - 1.87 (6.23%) Satisfactorily discussed how your company’s activities will affect the environment and did not submit or incompletely identified the steps you will take to mitigate any negative impacts. |
Points:2.1 (7%) Points Range:1.89 (6.3%) - 2.1 (7%) Thoroughly discussed how your company’s activities will affect the environment and did not submit or incompletely identified the steps you will take to mitigate any negative impacts. |
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BUS599-A3-9 2c. Determine any health issues / claims related to the product you are making, whether negative or positive. Suggest the strategy your company will use to mitigate any negative issues, and to ensure any positive claims are true. |
Points Range:0 (0%) - 1.45 (4.83%) Did not submit or incompletely determined any health issues / claims related to the product you are making, whether negative or positive. Did not submit or incompletely suggested the strategy your company will use to mitigate any negative issues, and to ensure any positive claims are true. |
Points Range:1.47 (4.9%) - 1.66 (5.53%) Partially determined any health issues / claims related to the product you are making, whether negative or positive. Partially suggested the strategy your company will use to mitigate any negative issues, and to ensure any positive claims are true. |
Points Range:1.68 (5.6%) - 1.87 (6.23%) Satisfactorily determined any health issues / claims related to the product you are making, whether negative or positive. Satisfactorily suggested the strategy your company will use to mitigate any negative issues, and to ensure any positive claims are true. |
Points:2.1 (7%) Points Range:1.89 (6.3%) - 2.1 (7%) Thoroughly determined any health issues / claims related to the product you are making, whether negative or positive. Thoroughly suggested the strategy your company will use to mitigate any negative issues, and to ensure any positive claims are true. |
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BUS599-A3-10 2d. Suggest your company’s plan, through advertising, distribution, and / or other methods, to target and reach only appropriate market segments |
Points Range:0 (0%) - 1.45 (4.83%) Did not submit or incompletely suggested your company’s plan, through advertising, distribution, and / or other methods, to target and reach only appropriate market segments. |
Points Range:1.47 (4.9%) - 1.66 (5.53%) Partially suggested your company’s plan, through advertising, distribution, and / or other methods, to target and reach only appropriate market segments.. |
Points Range:1.68 (5.6%) - 1.87 (6.23%) Satisfactorily suggested your company’s plan, through advertising, distribution, and / or other methods, to target and reach only appropriate market segments. |
Points:2.1 (7%) Points Range:1.89 (6.3%) - 2.1 (7%) Thoroughly suggested your company’s plan, through advertising, distribution, and / or other methods, to target and reach only appropriate market segments. |
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BUS599-A3-11 3. Clarity, writing mechanics, and formatting requirements |
Points Range:0 (0%) - 3.1 (10.35%) More than 6 errors present |
Points Range:3.15 (10.5%) - 3.56 (11.85%) 5-6 errors present |
Points Range:3.6 (12%) - 4 (13.35%) 3-4 errors present |
Points:4.28 (14.25%) Points Range:4.05 (13.5%) - 4.5 (15%) 0-2 errors present |
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BUS599-A3-12 4. For year one, revise and submit the Income Statement, Cash Flow Projections, and Balance Sheet sections from the “Business Plan Financials” MS Excel template (see: Course Required Files in Week 1). |
Points Range:0 (0%) - 3.1 (10.35%) Did not submit or incompletely, for year one, revised and submitted the Income Statement, Cash Flow Projections, and Balance Sheet sections from the “Business Plan Financials” MS Excel template (see: Course Required Files in Week 1). |
Points Range:3.15 (10.5%) - 3.56 (11.85%) Partially, for year one, revised and submitted the Income Statement, Cash Flow Projections, and Balance Sheet sections from the “Business Plan Financials” MS Excel template (see: Course Required Files in Week 1). |
Points:3.6 (12%) Points Range:3.6 (12%) - 4 (13.35%) Satisfactorily, for year one, revised and submitted the Income Statement, Cash Flow Projections, and Balance Sheet sections from the “Business Plan Financials” MS Excel template (see: Course Required Files in Week 1). |
Points Range:4.05 (13.5%) - 4.5 (15%) Thoroughly, for year one, revised and submitted the Income Statement, Cash Flow Projections, and Balance Sheet sections from the “Business Plan Financials” MS Excel template (see: Course Required Files in Week 1). |
Raw Total: 28.04 (of 30.0)
Feedback to Learner
This is a very well-thought out paper, and I really enjoyed reading it. You earned a grade of A (93%). You worked through the questions in this assignment in a meaningful way, with detailed support and thoughtful analysis. Please review my feedback below. Nice job with creating your company, product, and justifying the company name in detail. The company name is your brand and should be unique and easy to remember. You have done a good job in this section. It is important to understand the trends in your industry so that you can identify patterns or take advantage of opportunities. You should pay attention to past performance and growth projections. When you start a company, usually you identify a need in the market, or you are taking advantage of a trend. Really nice job clarifying your strategy and the key risks associated with your business. This will allow you to develop an appropriate strategy for your business. Nice job outlining your target market and the key demographic information. A clear picture of your target markets needed to design an appropriate strategy for your business. You did such a good job discussing your competition and your plan to differentiate your company! Good work! I enjoyed reading your section about the marketing and sales strategy. A solid strategy will lead to an increase in sales. Nice work describing ways in which your company is committed to being a good corporate citizen. Companies embracing corporate citizenship tend to have more support from the community. Excellent plan to mitigate the negative impacts of your company's activities on the environment! Being sustainable is helping companies be more competitive as well. Great work discussing the health claims related to the product your are making. I really enjoyed reading the strategy you developed for you company to address these health claims. Being prepared when presenting or discussing any claim related to the product should be a priority for any business owner. I enjoyed reading your company's plan to address only the appropriate market segments. Great work! Great job with the format, organization, and grammar. Your submitted Excel document has minor errors. You must follow the Business Plan Financials Guide to complete this document. Ensure the numbers look good for the investors.
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