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Dear NOMITHA, Thanks for submi!ng the assignment 1. You may find the feedback of the assignment as below and I hope you find it useful for the next assignment. 1. Analy"cal results No calcula"on was presented. 2. Selec"on of analy"cal techniques and evalua"on of the methodology for improving marke"ng decision-making In this sec"on you could explain what market share is and why it is useful for analysis. Don’t forget that methodology should not be wri#en as “what will be done” but rather what methodology is used. You could also clarify that what market share decomposi"on is and what the components are. 3. Interpreta"on of analysis output from a marke"ng perspec"ve This sec"on is about interpre"ng the results and not just simply repor"ng the numbers. Interpreta"on means explaining what each number means and how results compare between companies. You supposed to recognize that JB Hi-Fi is not performing well in both SOW and penetra"on rate. You could also men"on that JB has low percep"on of assortment as well as low brand recall based on the data analyses. You could also men"on that JB has low brand recall based on the data analyses which shows low awareness about JB in the market. 4. Develop management recommenda"ons In this part, you could iden"fy that the problem are with SOW and
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Rubric Name: T2 2020 MIS784 - Assignment 1
penetra"on rate, you could men"on that evalua"on of assortment is very low also the brand recall for JB is low; you could clearly provide link with SOW and low assortment as well as the link between brand recall (awareness) and penetra"on; you could recommend increase assortment to increase SOW and adver"sing to increase awareness which ul"mately increases the penetra"on rate. 5. Quality of wri"ng, Report forma!ng & Table & Figures to support conclusions That could be be#er to use some meaningful tables and figures and proper figures to visualize data. For instance market share is be#er to present as a pie chart. You didnt follow the report structure. Good luck with the next assignment, MIS784 team
Criteria Unsa"sfactory Sa"sfactory Good
Analysis:
Analy"cal results
(Marks: 3) GLO1
and GLO 3
Consistently,
independently and
skilfully uses
appropriate data
analysis techniques,
demonstra"ng some
exper"se and
specialised skills.
1.5-1.7
Consistently,
independently and
skilfully uses
appropriate data
analysis techniques,
demonstra"ng good
exper"se and
specialised skills
1.8-2
Proposes an
acceptable crea"ve
solu"ons to exis"ng
and/or new
situa"ons in
professional
prac"ce and/or
further learning that
indicates
sa"sfactory
comprehension of a
complex problem
Proposes a good
crea"ve solu"on to
exis"ng and/or new
situa"ons in
professional
prac"ce and/or
further learning that
indicates
comprehension of a
complex problem
and reflects expert
judgement of the
No analysis is
presented or
Irrelevant/inappropriate
techniques have been
used to analyse the
data with many errors
in the analysis
0-1.4
Proposes no or
inadequate solu"ons to
exis"ng and/or new
situa"ons in
professional prac"ce
and/or further learning
that indicate
comprehension of a
complex problem.
Solu"ons do not
consistently reflect any
intellectual
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Report: Selec"on
of analy"cal
techniques and
evalua"on of the
methodology for
improving
marke"ng
decision-making
(Marks: 4) GLO1
and GLO5Report:
Interpreta"on of
analysis output
from a marke"ng
perspec"ve
(Marks: 5) GLO1
and GLO5
Report: Develop
management
recommenda"ons
(Marks: 5) GLO5
and reflects
proficient
judgement of the
pros and cons of the
proposed solu"on.
2-2.3
pros and cons of the
proposed solu"on.
The proposed
solu"on reflect a
high level of
intellectual
independence and
autonomy.
2.4-2.7
Provides an
acceptable
interpreta"on of the
analysis output and
sa"sfactory
interpreta"ons from
a marke"ng stand
point.
2.5-2.9
Provides a good
interpreta"on of the
analysis output and
reasonable
interpreta"ons from
a marke"ng stand
point.
3-3.4
Provides
sa"sfactory
guidance as to how
solu"ons might be
skilfully and
crea"vely
implemented in a
manner that
sa"sfactorily
addresses mul"ple
contextual factors
of the problem.
2.5-2.9
Provides expert
guidance as to how
solu"ons might be
skilfully and
crea"vely
implemented in a
manner that
adequately
addresses mul"ple
contextual factors
of the problem.
3-3.4
Moderately uses
appropriate,
relevant, and
compelling content
to illustrate mastery
of the subject or
topic and presents a
clear, coherent,
independent and
professional
exposi"on of
complex knowledge
Mostly uses
appropriate,
relevant, and
compelling content
to illustrate mastery
of the subject or
topic and presents a
clear, coherent,
independent and
professional
exposi"on of
complex knowledge
independence,
adaptability and
integrity.
0-1.9
Provides no or a limited
interpreta"on of the
analysis output and no
logical interpreta"ons
from a marke"ng stand
point.
0-2.4
Provides no or limited
guidance as to how
solu"ons might be
skilfully and crea"vely
implemented in a
manner that addresses
mul"ple contextual
factors of the problem.
0-2.4
Always or mostly uses
inappropriate and/or
irrelevant content to
develop and explore
basic ideas and
presents an
unacceptable
exposi"on of complex
knowledge and ideas.
0-1.4
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Overall Score
Score
4.8 / 20 - 24 %
Feedback Date
07 September, 2020 7:44 PM
Assignment
Assignment 1
Report: Quality of
wri"ng, Report
forma!ng &
Table & Figures
and ideas.
1.5-1.7
and ideas.
1.8-2
Fail (N) Pass (P) Credit (C) Dis"nc"on (D)
Submission ID Submission(s) Date Submi#ed
7515947 MIS784_A1_220164727.docx (23.91 KB) 24 August, 2020 5:01 PM
MIS784_A1_220164727.xlsx (9.85 KB)
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