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Rubric Name: Research Article Summary (1-3)

This table lists criteria and criteria group names in the first column. The first row lists level names and includes scores if the rubric uses a numeric scoring method. You can give feedback on each criterion by tabbing to the add feedback buttons in the table.

Criteria

Exemplary

Accomplished

Developing

Criterion Score

Article Summary

15 points

Article summary is

accurate, well organized,

coherent and well written.

Includes main idea/most

important points of article.

Focuses on details, not

personal opinions

10 points

Summary is reasonably

accurate (some minor

errors); may include some

personal opinions.

5 points

Summary is inaccurate,

missing main ideas/points;

includes personal

opinions.

Score of Article Summary,10 / 15Criterion score has been overridden

Criterion Feedback

Article 1: The dependent variables for the study would be sixty-five adolescents (13–17 years) with anxiety disorders according to DSM-IV received 14 weeks of therapist-guided ICBT

(Luo & McAloon, 2021). - a dependent variable is the variable being affected or influenced in the study. For example it the student sought to fine how sleep (independent variable affects anxiety levels (dependent variable)

Article 3: The hypothesis was whether CBT and SSRI are effective treatments for adolescents with anxiety. - An hypothesis is s statement outcome. This seems to be more of the purpose or aim

The research design used was a sampling of adolescents

who meet certain criteria including age, diagnosis, etc. - research design is either qualitative, quantitative, mixed methods etc. Here you referred to the sample of participants.

The variables of interest were the adolescent children between 3 and 18 years of age who have been diagnosed with anxiety. And the children were considered as the dependent variables - Please refer to the book to familiarize yourself with dependent and independent variables.

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Critically analysis of the basic components of research:

45 points

Thorough analysis of all components: purpose, research question, hypothesis, research design, variables of interest (independent and dependent), selection/sampling, instrument(s), data collection, data analysis, research findings, ethical and multicultural considerations, strength and limitations, implications for practice, and implications for future research.

30 points

Most component is critically analyzed: purpose, research question, hypothesis, research design, variables of interest (independent and dependent), selection/sampling, instrument(s), data collection, data analysis, research findings, ethical and multicultural considerations, strength and limitations, implications for practice, and implications for future research.

25 points

Critical details missing for multiple components: purpose, research question, hypothesis, research design, variables of interest (independent and dependent), selection/sampling, instrument(s), data collection, data analysis, research findings, ethical and multicultural considerations, strength and limitations, implications for practice, and implications for future research.

Score of Critically analysis of the basic components of research:,35 / 45Criterion score has been overridden

Mechanics, Article choice Appearance, and Formatting

15 points

Article selection is current

(within 5 years). Article

follows APA format.

No grammar/spelling

errors. All sections in

order and well-formatted.

10 points

Article is outdated (6-10

years old), a few (1-2) errors

in APA format. Occasional

grammar/spelling errors

(less than 3), generally

readable with some rough

spots in writing style.

5 points

Article is outdated (more

than 10 years old).

Frequent errors in APA

format (more than 2).

Frequent grammar

and/or spelling errors (more

than 4), Organization poor,

sloppy formatting.

Score of Mechanics, Article choice Appearance, and Formatting,15 / 15Criterion score has been overridden

Rubric Total Score

Total

Score of Research Article Summary (1-3),60 / 75The overall rubric score has been overridden. The score will no longer update based on changes to the rubric.

Overall Score

Overall Score

Exemplary

68 - 75 - Grade A

Accomplished

60 - 67 - Grade B

Developing

0- 59- Below Grade B

Score

60 / 75 - B

Feedback Date

Sep 14, 2021 11:15 AM

Assignment

Article Summary

Submission ID Submission(s) Date Submitted

26955397 Articles Summaries Kelly, M.docx (18.69 KB)

Sep 7, 2021 11:16 PM