MSW DSM-V Final Paper

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Paper Style: APA Paper Type: Research

Taken English? Yes English as Second Language? No

Feedback Areas: Sentence Structure, Grammar & Mechanics

Paper Goals: A final paper on ADHA. In APA format. I struggle with sentence structure and APA

format. Also I struggle with using words that do not add value to assignments.

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You have a comprehensive assessment of ADHD here. Well done. Your assessment is well researched and well supported.

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I made grammatical suggestions where I felt they were appropriate.

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Remember to include the page number

of the information used, if your source

provides them.

If this is the medical definition of this

disorder, then ignore this comment. If it

is not, then "impulsivity" is not a word.

Try "impulsiveness" instead.

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For sources that have 3-5 author's APA

guidelines state that you should list all of

the author's last names the first time you

reference the source, then use the first

author's last name and et al. for every

reference after the first.

This is worded awkwardly.

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research?

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I'm not sure this word is needed.

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This is worded awkwardly.

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