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Feedback Case Study: Mr. M. - Rubric

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Expand Clinical Manifestations of Mr. M. assessment

Clinical Manifestations of Mr. M.

9.48 / 12

Criteria Comments

Provide all labs all diagnostics and all VS here

Expand Diagnoses and Secondary Diagnoses assessment

Diagnoses and Secondary Diagnoses

9.48 / 12

Criteria Comments

Incorrect diagnosis

Expand Explanation of Expected Abnormalities During Nursing Assessment 

Explanation of Expected Abnormalities During Nursing Assessment

14.22 / 18

Approaching

Criteria Comments

Minimal data presented

Expand Interventions for Support assessment

Interventions for Support

16.02 / 18

Acceptable

16.02 points

Discussion of interventions that can be put into place to support the patient and his family is detailed.

Criteria Comments

Be more specific and use EBP research to back up your data

Expand Actual or Potential Problems Based on Condition assessment

Actual or Potential Problems Based on Condition

16.02 / 18

Criteria Comments

Provide more data here

Expand Thesis, Position, or Purpose assessment

Thesis, Position, or Purpose

4.74 / 6

Approaching

Criteria Comments

I used part of the first paragraph for this area but normally it will be a statement regarding what you will discuss in the paper that is separate from all other data

Expand Development, Structure, and Conclusion assessment

Development, Structure, and Conclusion

4.5 / 6

Criteria Comments

No conclusion offered

Expand Evidence assessment

Evidence

4.74 / 6

Criteria Comments

The more specific EBP research data the better the evidence

Expand Mechanics of Writing assessment

Mechanics of Writing

3.6 / 3.6

Criteria Comments

No comments.

Expand Format/Documentation assessment

Format/Documentation

2.4 / 2.4

Target

2.4 points

No errors in formatting or documentation are present.

Criteria Comments

No comments.