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Application Essay 1 Comment by Baggett, Mary Elizabeth (English): No cover page needed for MLA

Yolanda McNeil

ENGL 603

Liberty University

"Annabel Lee” by Edgar Allan Poe Comment by Baggett, Mary Elizabeth (English): Can you think of a title that more accurately captures your paper’s focus? What are you going to be discussing about Poe’s poem?

"Annabel Lee" is a poem that was written by Edgar Allan Poe and it focused on the theme of love (Poetry Foundation, 2020). The poem assumes the first-person narrative, and this is seen in the voice that addresses the readers. The speaker gives information about his life and the love of his life. The poem also represents the theme of death. In line with the theme of death, the speaker narrates the demise of his lover who was swept away by the wind. The theme of jealousy is also among the themes that are present in the poem. The angels, in this, are accused of planning the death of Annabel (Poetry Foundation, 2020). The angels are driven to engage in the act by envy due to the strong love that is between the speaker and Annabel. The article will be analyzed using new critical principles. Comment by Baggett, Mary Elizabeth (English): Combine these independent clauses into one that better reflects the relationship between the two points: “Annabel Lee,” a poem written by Edgar Allan Poe, focuses on. . . Comment by Baggett, Mary Elizabeth (English): Is written in (or is a first-person narrative) Comment by Baggett, Mary Elizabeth (English): Provide a transition here; the paragraph abruptly shifts to new topic Comment by Baggett, Mary Elizabeth (English): Rather than stating your intentions for your paper, just make your claim—what is the theme of the poem, and how do the literary devices you’re focusing on communicate that theme?

New Critical Principles

New Critical Principles focus on the elements of a poem. Poets use the elements of poetry to come up with their pieces. Elements guide the process of compiling different pieces of a poem with the main aim of coming up with a complete poem that submits to poetry rules. Some of the elements that come in handy are irony, paradox, ambiguity, and tension. The irony is an element that promotes contrast. The employment of irony tries to create a contrasting image between the information provided in the poem and the reality. Comment by Baggett, Mary Elizabeth (English): Cut this explanation of New Criticism; just employ it in this paper—demonstrate a working knowledge of it

Irony

“Annabel Lee” is a poem that has made good use of irony. The poem uses irony to increase the understanding of the reader as far as the topic of discussion is concerned. One of the lines that represent irony is, “The angels, not half so happy in Heaven” (Stanza 3, line 1). The irony of the line can be linked to beliefs that people hold about heaven and everything heavenly. In reality, people believe that heaven is a place for people with a holy heart. Therefore, when the poet states that the angels were not happy, it means that his message is ironic when compared to beliefs held about heaven (Belsey, 2016). The irony is an element that increases the understanding of the reader as far as the topic of discussion is concerned. When it gets to the point where angels are envious, it means that love has have gone overboard. The poet uses the element of irony to show how strong their love was. Comment by Baggett, Mary Elizabeth (English): To what end? how does the irony communicate the theme? Comment by Baggett, Mary Elizabeth (English): Explain the irony a bit more; this is vague and doesn’t help readers know what you’re getting at Comment by Baggett, Mary Elizabeth (English): How so?

Paradox

Paradox presents a contradictory concept that reveals a hidden truth. The poet is proud of the love he had with his lover and goes ahead to state that no other couple experiences such kind of love. The contradiction is present in this case because the poet talks on behalf of others. It would not be possible for the poet to understand the type of love that other people experience. However, the statements that the poet makes have hidden truth when analyzed from a personal perspective (Belsey, 2016). Though people may have a lot of knowledge on matters related to love, love can only be measured by assessing people who are in love. The feeling affects parties that are in love. Therefore, though the sentiments of the poet might seem outrageous, it might be true that their love can be compared to none other. Comment by Baggett, Mary Elizabeth (English): Transition to this discusison of paradox; also, don’t offer background about what paradox is—simply discuss it in light of the poem. Comment by Baggett, Mary Elizabeth (English): Specifically who? Comment by Baggett, Mary Elizabeth (English): In this discussion, link to specific details from the poem—where do you see the paradox show up?

Ambiguity

Ambiguity is an element that has been used by many poets. Ambiguity is represented when a poet uses statements or words that might have more than one meaning (Belsey, 2016). “The angels, not half so happy in Heaven” is one of the lines that the poet has used. The line can be interpreted using two different perspectives. “Half happy” might mean that one is happy but not completely. However, the author uses the line to present a different meaning. According to the author, the line means unhappy. Comment by Baggett, Mary Elizabeth (English): How is this ambiguous? How does the ambiguity point to the theme of the poem?

Tension

The tension element brings together different elements in a poem. The elements work hand in hand to present a poem that has a meaning and message. They help to build on the message and poetry rules. The element of rhythm has been overlooked in the poem and that has worked well in helping the poet to send a message home. Due to the lack of rhythm is the number of lines in each stanza, the poet is able to give his story without limitations and restrictions. Alliteration is an element that adds flavor to a poem (Belsey, 2016). In the case of “Annabel Lee”, alliteration has been overlooked and this is seen in every line. Consonant sounds are not present in the poem. The absence of consonant sounds has helped the poet to narrate his story without limitations. The poet sticks to words and their dictionary meanings. The direct use of words helps to improve the understanding of the reader. The poem is self-explanatory and that is proof that all elements have been used to make the poem better and easy to understand. Comment by Baggett, Mary Elizabeth (English): Develop discussion of tension first and then get into alliteration in new paragraph; keep each paragraph limited to one topic. Comment by Baggett, Mary Elizabeth (English): Add conclusion that recaps main points

ReferencesWorks Cited

Belsey, C. (2016). Criticism, Philosophy and The Differend. In Literary Studies and the Philosophy of Literature (pp. 17-35). Palgrave Macmillan, Cham. Comment by Baggett, Mary Elizabeth (English): This looks like APA format? Use MLA: https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/research_and_citation/mla_style/mla_formatting_and_style_guide/mla_works_cited_page_basic_format.html

Poetry Foundation. (2020). Annabel Lee. Retrieved from https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/44885/annabel-lee