1-3 Final Project Milestone One: Edited PSY 510 Paper (Research Proposal)

Professor’s feedback

I appreciate your efforts on your final proposal. You have a good start towards your project but many areas would benefit from elaboration. Qualtrics is just a format for presenting your survey, and the materials is the actual survey you will be using. The Writing Center has some great resources you might find helpful. Note that the proposal will change from future-tense to past-tense in the next course (520) as you design and collect data and will include more sections (such as results and conclusions), but what you have is a nice start. Your grade is based on the rubric for this assignment, and I focused on how well you incorporated feedback from previous milestones, as well as the overall flow of your final proposal. Let me know if you have any questions.