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keep as one sentence
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will be
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Finally the report will provide...
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The products include...
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Domestically,
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Keep this in the present tense
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unclear - can you rewrite this?
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Clear and strongly expressed
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present tense
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give
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Make sure you refer to this
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This is a little unclear. Are women with kinky hair the ones who are worried about their health etc? Perhaps rewrite this
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Unclear - can you rewrite this?
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customer?
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repeated ords from pervious sentence - us another word
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searching to...
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Write a short conclusion or summary.
Comment 32
Mostly clear, well-researched and referenced, but some sentences are unclear. Re-write these, as shown.
Provide a conclusion.
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