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Rubric Name: COU 630 Assessment Report Draft Two Rubric

COU-630-Q3485 Career Counseling 20TW3 SC

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Criteria Proficient Needs Improvement Not Evident

Assessment

Scoring: Scored 0 / 8

Assessment

Results

Interpretation:

Results

6.8 / 8

8 points

Discusses how the

assessments are

scored

6.8 points

Discusses how the

assessments are

scored, but lacks

detail or has

inaccuracies

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8 points

States the results of

each assessment

0 points

Does not state the

results of each

assessment

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0 points

Does not address

how assessments are

scored

6.8 points

States the results of

each assessment but

lacks detail or

contains inaccuracies

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Criteria Proficient Needs Improvement Not Evident

Assessment

Results

Interpretation:

Assessment Means

6.8 / 8

Assessment

Results

Interpretation:

Mean Together

0 / 8

Assessment

Results

Interpretation:

Future Career

6.8 / 8

Assessment

Results

Interpretation:

Validity and

Reliability

0 / 8

8 points

Summarizes what

each assessment

means

0 points

Does not summarize

what each

assessment means

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8 points

Summarizes what

the assessments

mean together

6.8 points

Summarizes what the

assessments mean

together, but lacks

detail

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8 points

Summarizes what

the results mean in

terms of the client’s

future career

0 points

Does not summarize

what the results

mean in terms of the

client's future career

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8 points

Addresses the

validity and reliability

of the results

6.8 points

Addresses the validity

and reliability of the

results, but has

inaccuracies or lacks

detail

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6.8 points

Summarizes what

each assessment

means, but lacks

detail or has

inaccuracies

0 points

Does not summarize

what the

assessments mean

together

6.8 points

Summarizes what the

results mean in terms

of the client’s future

career, but lacks

detail in potential

future careers or has

inaccuracies

0 points

Does not address the

validity and reliability

of the results

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Criteria Proficient Needs Improvement Not Evident

Recommendations:

Educational Level 6.8 / 8

Recommendations:

Education

Resources

6.8 / 8

Recommendations:

Occupational

Resources

6.8 / 8

Recommendations:

Career Direction 6.8 / 8

8 points

Discusses how the

results impact their

educational level

0 points

Does not discuss

how the results

impact their

educational level

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8 points

Identifies any

specific education

resources

recommended for

the client

0 points

Does not identify any

specific education

resources

recommended for the

client

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8 points

Identifies any

occupational

resources you may

provide the client

with

0 points

Does not identify any

occupational

resources you may

provide the client

with

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8 points

Discusses what the

client’s suggested

career direction

should be moving

forward

0 points

Does not discuss

what you suggest the

client's career

direction should be

moving forward

6.8 points

Discusses how the

results impact their

educational level, but

lacks detail or

contains inaccuracies

6.8 points

Identifies any specific

education resources

recommended for the

client, but submission

is inappropriate or

does not cover all

required elements

6.8 points

Identifies any specific

occupational

resources

recommended for the

client, but submission

is inappropriate or

does not cover all

required elements

6.8 points

Discusses what the

client’s suggested

career direction

should be moving

forward, but lacks

sufficient

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Total 66.4 / 100

Overall Score

Criteria Proficient Needs Improvement Not Evident

Recommendations:

Data 6.8 / 8

Conclusion: Career

Recommendations 8 / 8

Articulation of

Response 4 / 4

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8 points

Supports the client’s

career direction

using data

0 points

Does not support the

client’s career

direction using data

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6.8 points

Summarizes overall

career

recommendations but

has inconsistencies or

lacks detail

0 points

Does not summarize

overall career

recommendations

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3.4 points

Submission has major

errors related to

citations, grammar,

spelling, syntax, or

organization that

negatively impact

readability and

articulation of main

ideas

0 points

Submission has

critical errors related

to citations, grammar,

spelling, syntax, or

organization that

prevent

understanding of

ideas

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recommendations, or

recommendations do

not align to the

assessment results

6.8 points

Supports the client’s

career direction using

data, but lacks clarity

8 points

Summarizes overall

career

recommendations

4 points

Submission has no

major errors related

to citations,

grammar, spelling,

syntax, or

organization

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Score

46.48 / 70 - F

Feedback Date

Mar 15, 2020 2:08 PM

Assignment

7-2 Career Assessment Report: Draft Two

Points earned out of 100 86 points minimum

The overall submission earned 86

points or more. Final calculation of

grades can be found in the

gradebook.

Points earned out of 100 1 point minimum

The overall submission earned 1

points or more. Final calculation of

grades can be found in the

gradebook.

Points earned out of 100 0 points minimum

The overall submission earned 0

points or more. Final calculation of

grades can be found in the

gradebook.

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