Explorations in Leadership

FEEDBACK FOR M3 Draft PPT Slides

Hello Dear Student,

Great progress. Missing most of your references. Use sentence case for the Graham reference title. Use italics for journal names and volume.

No need to keep repeating phrases in bullets

Slide 3

All these points are historical perspectives and can well serve as a second background slide. (repeat the heading e.g., Background (cont.)

What you really want for the rationale is why we should we explore her contribution now.

Consider these ideas:

Can we still learn from her?

Is there still poverty in the world that needs the kind of love and care MT gave?

Slide 5

The first and the last point are aims second is not - place this point somewhere else.

Mother Theresa's

Slide 6

delete the bullet in the opening phrase

"Through the review of literature, this project will:"

Then bullets:

Explore poverty...

Describe role and impact of Missionaries of Charity

Redefining of love and care...

Outline chronology of Mother Theresa's life

(start each with a verb).

Well done.

FEEDBACK FOR M4 Draft PPT Slides

Hello Dear Student,

Well done. As you've posted this week's draft already, I'll comment only on the main body section and you can see my review from last time.

Slide 7 and others: The first phrase needs no bullet: According to Alpion (2014): (continue with bullets)

Formatting is well done - sentences are not too long and are well-bulleted. Good level of content