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Thank you for your submission. While you do a great job in providing details and evidence throughout your paper, you answer each question as its own. Make sure to piece together the whole essay and make it flow together. All paragraphs should flow together and should give the reader an idea of the timeline. For questions 1 & 2 some parts can be used to answer parts of one another, same thing with section 3 & 4. Make one introduction & conclusion for the whole paper. Looking forward to connecting and reading your final draft. Thank you!