US military history

Page 1 comments:

· Can you be more specific? Do you mean strategic / policy objectives, end states, etc?

· Those goals should be the bulk your discussion here.

Page 2 comments:

· Obs. needs a lot more here (this is after the first bullet in subtopic II)

· Your thesis says “unpopular policies”, your main point needs to match that. (First bullet of subtopic III)

· Does not seem to relate to this main point. (3rd bullet in subtopic III)

Page 3 comments:

· Ok, but our readings in H411 are probably needed here too. (First citation)

· Use the readings H408-409 (2nd citation)

Page 4 comments:

· He insists on using the readings block (H407…)

Final remark: Pass- this will work but see my comments on the need to add some content + ensure your organization is solid.