Organizational Culture and Employee Behavior 4

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Data to be collected doesn’t necessarily make sense…You only repeated your research questions. You may consider saying something like:

 

In this mixed methods study, quantitate and qualitative data were collected to answer the following research questions:

 

List your questions…

 

Ratinale why mixed methods study was the most appropriate option for this study.

 

Describe why this data was necessary/needed to answer the research questions.

 

Describe your population, explain your data collection method in details ( as you did) and convince the readers why this data collection method was the most appropriate. How did you choose your participants? How did you access them… Provide rationale

 

Your limitations don’t make sense… The responders will be subjective but you should be the one convincing the reader that you did everything in your power not to be subjective. Instead, say something like this study is limited to a certain area, such as you had limited access to gain access to the appropriate type or geographic scope of participants and that’s why your survey participants may not truly be a random sample and/or you should have drafted your interview questions from a wider perspective etc.

 

Also, spell check your paper please…