Order 1003555: Deceptive Body Language

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Good Introduction! Introduce yourself in the Name/Bio section. Add how your topic is relevant to the audience. Preview of main points is good. Today I will discuss the following four main points... Good job. Sources must be added throughout the body - nice job. Remember we build credibility by using supporting evidence through research. Strive to have at least two sources per main point to either verify the information or show alternative perspectives. Great work. Transitions could be strengthened. We have discussed _________, now let's discuss _____________. Bridge the ideas together and move the audience through your points. You do have a clincher. Make it meaningful. Can you find a quote or statistic? Review for grammar - few errors throughout. References are included. Review APA format - few errors throughout.