Response to Advertisement Job Application Letter (RTA Letter)

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With regard to formatting: You are missing a physical address in your inside address. There is an extra line space above the salutation. There are grammatical errors throughout. I circled one, locate others and correct. The letter must also be kept to one page only. You will need to edit the support and claim paragraphs to be shorter because you will need to revise your last two paragraphs completely and add a follow up statement. With regard to the last two paragraphs, y ou will need to revise your third and fourth warrants and backing paragraphs into a more detailed discussion of soft skills. What is present is vague and overly used language that is not provable. Discuss soft skills in both. Google soft skills and decide which skills you will want to give to Jack and write them within the context of his experience which will make his claim of them more credible.