Analyze Hyatt Hotels CSR policy
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Example1_VeryGood-2.pdf
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9% SIMILARITY INDEX
6% INTERNET SOURCES
5% PUBLICATIONS
9% STUDENT PAPERS
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Zhiqi (Lola) Wang 735212 ORIGINALITY REPORT
PRIMARY SOURCES
Submitted to University of Derby Student Paper
migrationdataportal.org Internet Source
Submitted to University of the Arts, London Student Paper
Submitted to The University of Manchester Student Paper
www.globalgoals.org Internet Source
www.itu.int Internet Source
knowledgehub.unsse.org Internet Source
sdgresources.relx.com Internet Source
Submitted to PSB Academy (ACP eSolutions) Student Paper
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Exclude quotes Off
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Submitted to University of Greenwich Student Paper
www.colart.com Internet Source
www.landisgyr.ch Internet Source
www.gov.uk Internet Source
FINAL GRADE
80/0 Zhiqi (Lola) Wang 735212 GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
The work is showing an excellent understanding of what you should have done in the assignment. There is a clear understanding of the company practices, where you are able, also with the support of the table to show the main findings. Further description on there could have been given however this is already a good presenting way of sharing the findings with the reader. Going ahead with you work it is very well explained the what are the aspects that the company is good at but at the same the elements that company should improve further, with a good strength and weaknesses interpretation, even if there is still space for improvement in the discussion. The part of the evaluation, based on the company results in terms of their practices but also your table shows clearly what are the elements that the company must improve and you are excellent in explaining what are for you the missing points, also with the support of the models and additional reference. This is an excellent work that, although might be further improved in the style and in the in depth overview, shows an excellent understanding of what was the goal of this assessment that was evaluating the best practices of your work. Well done.
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Comment 1
Give a title to the table.
Comment 2
It is good to have a table but add a bit of a comment after it to enable to have a "so what" understanding
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