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Evaluation Essay Reflection

 Assignment Overview

This journal assignment allows you to reflect on the writing process of your evaluation essay.

 Directions

After you review all the materials for this lesson, use this journal entry to make a plan for revision.

1. What feedback did you receive from the peer review?

2. Did you receive any peer review feedback that doesn't quite fit with your goals for the essay? Is there a way to address the reader's confusion in your essay?

3. What elements do you still need to work on (this can come from the peer review or YOUR OWN REVIEW OF THE DRAFT)?

4. What is your plan for revision based on the previous three questions? 

5. 500+ WORDS IN MLA FORMAT

Colleague Respond/ comment I got on the draft:

This evaluation was very informative. I would only say that there is nothing to compare the product against in the essay i.e, the comparison is only between the iPhon14 and itself. I was not sure what the criteria of judgment was.