reaction essay

1. What is the topic of the essay? (What are you reacting to?)

2. What is the thesis? (the main point of your personal reaction)

3. Is the introduction effective? Will the reader want to read your essay based on your introduction?

4. Does the introduction contain both a brief summary and your opinion (thesis statement)?

5. Identify the topic sentence of each of the body paragraphs.

Body Paragraph 1

China is stealing personal information by using app

Body Paragraph 2

China is controlling the media by their app

6. Does the essay have a conclusion?

no

7. If we had more time to work on this essay, what would you change?

8. What do you like about the essay? What is the best part of it?