Never let me go novel by Kazuo Ishiguro
Never Let Me Go Evidence, Arrangement and Analytic Foci for Essay 4
“No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.” Eleanor Roosevelt
Distal Causes (all Necessary)
Worldwide focus on medical technology post-WWII and radically increased life expectancy; 262
The donor program’s success; 262-263
The Hailsham Campaign; 42-43, 261-263
The Morningdale Scandal and Race; 263-265
Perpetuating Causes (all Sufficient)
Carers; 3-5, 132, 150, 200-203, 207-208, 288
Coding from Hailsham (see below!)
Donor Pride; 225-227, 280-283
Evidence
Urban Legends and Hailsham Discourse
The Boy Tied to a Tree with his Hands and Feet Cut Off and The Girl Locked Outside the Gate; 50-52, 78
The Deferral; 141-145, 152-155, 176-177, 257-258
Hailsham and its rhetoric; 10, 16, 22-23, 29, 36, 67-69, 74-75, 81-84, 85-89, 115-118, 267-269
The Hailsham Life I (Positive Evidence)
The Exchanges, The Sales and “Bumper Crops”; 16, 41-42
Collections; 38-39, 70-73
Madame’s Gallery; 30-36, 40, 252-255, 259-262
Kathy’s tape, “Never Let Me Go” and denying hope; 70-73, 81-84, 270-272, 273 (?)
Sexual Freedom; 83-84, 94-99, 238-239
The Hailsham Life II (Negative Evidence)
What things are missing from life at Hailsham (late 1970s-1990s), and how does each contribute to the phenomenon we are considering?
Thesis
Describe the MOST SIGNIFICANT CAUSE (S) of the phenomenon and note WHY it/they is/are
Intro, Arrangement of Causes
Deductive: General Rule (T)→Specific Examples Proving the Rule
most→least important
least→most important
most→least obvious
least→most obvious
Inductive: CIS or RQ→Specific Examples→General Rule (T)
most→least important
least→most important
most→least obvious
least→most obvious
Refutation
consideration of potential reader questions and objections along the way
alternative cause: in general, the idea of positive causes vs. negative ones
Citations and Work (s) Cited page
For “In-Text” Identification of Sources use EITHER...
“Speaker Tags” ...when Kathy rhetorically asks, “That’s what we’re supposed to be doing, isn’t it?”
or MLA citations: ...when Kathy reminds us that she’s always thinking about getting back
“to wherever it was [she] was supposed to be.” (288).
Work(s) Cited Page: one entry for the text (of course, if supporting sources are used, list them too)