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Argumentative Writing © Cult of Pedagogy
ESSAY 1 • DRAFT 1
Although opportunities to earn a good living without a college degree
seem to be growing, attending college is still a smart career move for students.
It opens up more opportunities for getting a job, it helps you figure out what
kind of job is right for you, and it will help you earn a lot more money over
your lifetime.
First, having a college degree increases your chances of getting a job. To
become a web designer, real estate agent, or chef, you don’t have to have any
type of college degree, but having a degree won’t prevent you from getting any
of those jobs. On the other hand, you can’t become a teacher, an accountant, a
doctor, or an engineer without a degree. The math is simple: The more
education you have, the more job options you have. And more options will
give you a more financially stable life.
Attending college is also a good career choice because it gives students
a safe place to figure out what kind of work they want to do, trying out
different things until they find a good fit. That was the case for University of
Maryland student Stacey Skulnik, who laughed when she heard that the
average college student changes their major twice. “I had always considered
myself to be decisive and positive of my future,” she said. Then she went on to
change her own major—first from business to communications, and then to
journalism. “Now, as a junior,” she says, “I am happier than ever. I am
stimulated by my academic work and enthusiastic about my growth as a
writer.” Many other college students like Stacey go through the same process:
thinking they want to do one thing, but realizing later it’s not right for them.
Within a college environment, you can explore interests easily, without
having to change jobs or move to a new location, and having experts available
to help you learn about different careers means you’re more likely to find just
the right path.
Yes, College Is Worth It
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Argumentative Writing © Cult of Pedagogy
Essay 1 • Draft 1 (continued)
Finally, a college education is more likely to help you earn more money
over your lifetime. College graduates earn far more money than those who do
not get the degree. A 2014 study by the Economic Policy Institute estimated
that people with four-year college degrees earned 98 percent more per hour
than those who did not finish college. So even if it seems like you’d be able to
earn some good money right out of high school, take a look at the long term
and you’ll see that college definitely pays off over time.
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