Planning Benefits Strategically

Hello Tonya

Thanks for completing and uploading your assignment for review. It’s our third assignment with only two left to go. As I reviewed your work, I could clearly see that you have presented information and thoughts that have added some value to the main topic expectations for the paper. Please note some additional findings below.

· The introduction section should not have a heading called introduction and the heading should not be bold text. Also not that the introduction section is misleading as it does not fully tell the reader what the entire paper is about.

· Citations throughout the paper are not set up correctly according to our course rules.

· You have many citations claiming to represent certain information from sources, yet you have not properly identified the words for your readers. This is very necessary and required.

So, that sums up the feedback Tonya. I want you to know that you have done quite well with this assignment. Work on the above issues and you will do great next time. We still have 2 assignments remaining, so dig in and prepare to do your best work. Don’t lose sight of the fact that there are numerous tools and information available to help you succeed. But as well, I, too, am always here to support your success.

If there are any questions at all regarding the feedback, please let me know.

Dr. Wash