Critical Analysis of a Film Review

Please refer the PDF call “Attanayaka Fernando essay 2 draft.docx” attached with this document. All the blue clouds notes are the errors and error remarks are mentioned below respectively with the PDF.

· 1 - You don’t need to bold your title here

· P/v- Passive voice (changing passive constructions to active voice always makes writing more lively and accessible.

· 2- Put words in quotes when referring to them as words themselves

· p/v - passive voice voice (changing passive constructions to active voice always makes writing more lively and accessible)

· citation error - MLA cites location in source( page number ). Not like APA

· 3. Numerous other sorts of tropes exist than the four mention to determine genre such as cinematography techniques, type of musical scoring, sound design, lighting, editing ,etc

· Title punct- Title punctuation error

· 4- the setting is where the plot takes place, not where it was filmed. Movies set on alien planet aren’t actually filmed on alien planet, for a example

· 5- what /where exactly is your thesis/overall argument ?

· Expl- Expletive see pg 662 in SMH

· PV- passive voice voice (changing passive constructions to active voice always makes writing more lively and accessible)

· 6- The biggest reason genres change is because of societal changes. The fact that we don’t get as many westerns today than in the 1950s has nothing to do with the quality of the cameras.

· Expl- Expletive see pg 662 in SMH

· Expl- Expletive see pg 662 in SMH

· 7- there are way more than four in genre category

· 8. I still have no idea what your actual argument about this specific film is

· 9- how does any of this to advance a specific argument

· 10- Okay got that from the intro- what exactly is your argument about how the film uses this genre?

· Title punct-The punctuation error

· 11- It isn’t a movie

· POV- In3rd person exclusively informal academic writing . these essay are not about you , but reader can learn from the film

· 12-so is your main point here that it strays away from the medical genre trope of lighting to used? To what purpose does it do this? Discuss specific examples and use images (screenshots from the film itself) in your essay to illustrate your claims

· Expl- Expletive see pg 662 in SMH

· Contract – break up contractions informal academic writing

· Contract – break up contractions informal academic writing

· 13- you lost me here. Numerous excellent films have flashbacks. Numerous excellent films do not. It is a simple narrative technique