Final Business Model Canvas

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Peer Review Form

Peer review the paper assigned to you by reading it carefully and checking the following components. Make specific notations, comments, and corrections on the paper. Complete the peer review form, and submit both the annotated paper and the completed form to the instructor.

Criteria

Yes/No

Comments

Are all nine boxes of the "Business Model Canvas" included in the summary?

Yes

Yes, all nine boxes are included in the paper.

Does the paper include research from at least five sources?

Yes

Yes, the paper includes research from at least five sources. Good work here.

Are the sources relevant to defend the proposed business model?

Yes

Yes, the sources are relevant to defend the proposed business model.

Are the resources formatted properly?

Yes

The last couple do not need to have the hyperlink. But everything else looks like it is correctly formatted.

Does the flow of the paper and sentence structure make sense?

Yes

However, there are some things repeated too many times and some things that are left unsaid, which need to be touched on a bit more.

Is the summary supported with relevant details, reasons, facts, and examples?

Yes

Examples were given, but no strong details.

Is there a strong conclusion to the paper?

No

There is no present conclusion to the paper.

Are the mechanics of writing (spelling, punctuation, grammar, language use, etc.) correct?

Yes

Only a couple of small errors.

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