3-4 page argumentative essay on one of the following topics

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MLA does not include years for intext citations. Review MLA sources posted on the course modules.

Introductory paragraph is too long. Introduction should simply introduce your topic and state your thesis. Because the intro is so long, it is difficult to determine what the thesis is and what your sub-points for your body paragraphs.

Body 1- How many different points are you making in this paragraph? Each body paragraph should focus on one main point. In this paragraph, you start talking about fascination with true crime to toxic masculinity that victimizes women. These are different points. Choose one point to focus on each paragraph.

Body 2- The first two sentences need to connect to topic and question from the writing prompt.

Where is your counterargument? Make sure that your argumentative essay includes a counterargument.

intro- 6

body-6

counterargument-15

late-11

total-38

100-38=62