Week 5 WRTG 394

In this discussion, you will re-write a sample executive summary by applying the style and structure from the Victoria Business School Report (from Week 3). You will also critique the summary’s use of research. Provide feedback for two classmates’ answers.

Please examine the sample research-based report, Evening Shades.” 

Then answer the following questions. 

1. Examine the executive summary.  Please re-write the executive summary using the example from the Victoria Business School from week 3.  In other words, read over the executive summary from the report in the document from the Victoria Business School.  Then rewrite the executive summary for the “Evening Shades” report in similar fashion to that of the Victoria Business School report.

2. Look at the sources listed.  How could the sources be improved upon?  You can write one or two sentences in answering this question.

Please peruse the sample research-based report, "Improving Employee Retention and Turnover Rates."  You can access the sample from Content for Week 5.

Then answer the following questions:

1. Has the writer followed the assignment instructions for the research report assignment and provided all sections of the report, completed correctly. as requested by the instructions? If not, what has not been done correctly?

2. Does the executive summary follow the model from the Victoria Business School and include Headings and other elements that model recommends?

3. Describe one example of primary research and one example of secondary research used in the student's report.