Order 1022143: Research Paper (Maximillian Morrel)

English II Research Paper Self-Edit

1. In RED ink, circle any 1st or 2nd person pronouns, unless they are from textual support (direct quote).

2. Highlight in PINK the thesis sentence. Is the thesis sentence the last one in the introduction?

3. Highlight in GREEN each topic sentence. Does each topic sentence contain a point that reflects back to the thesis sentence?

4. Is there more commentary than support? (4:1)

5. Is the textual evidence directly related to the motif?

6. Check verbs. Are they active and vivid? Yes No

Write passive or weak verbs next to any verbs that are not active.

7. Are there specific details in each paragraph? Yes No

Did you elaborate (give commentary) for each detail? Yes No

If not, write add details and commentary where needed.

8. Did you use transitions phrases/sentences between paragraphs? Yes No

Write “add transitional words” or “ideas” where needed.

9. Do you have a variety of sentence types (complex, simple, compound)? Yes No

10. Conclusion—Does it address the purpose of writing the paper? Yes No