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Student ID # 900723595 Comment by Rayne Bozeman: YOU SCORED 5.5/25. Please review the comments below and address each one for your final proposal. Do not add anything new unless the comment states that something was missing. Otherwise, just make edits. Do not start from scratch. See the Notes to Fix document on Moodle for APA formatting. Set up an appointment if you have any questions. TITLE PAGE (0/2 points) - 2 points Missing title page. See Moodle for an example title page; Go to the section for APA Research Proposal; open the folder called “Paper Editing” then open the document called “Sample APA Paper” Your title page must contain running head, manuscript header, paper title, student ID number, page number and institutional affiliation; do not include an author note. OPENING PARAGRAPH (1/4 points) - 3 points; The opening paragraph should only be 1 paragraph long. You are off to a good start here. You went into a lot of detail about the empathy IV but remember that you have 2 IVs and a DV. You need to mention all 3 variables to set up the argument of this research. Please add the following details: 1. You will need your paper title on this first page. It should match your paper title. 2. Start by explaining that people can be discriminated against because of their age. Try to find a specific example of cage-based discrimination from the news or a well-known recent issue. This is not meant to be a personal narrative. You should not be using “I” statements. This about how the articles you read were written. They talk about the problem as a neutral 3rd party. They do not use a 1st person perspective. 3. Mention that one way age discrimination plays out is by who gets helped. People tend to help those who are similar to themselves (ingroup members) more than they help outgroup members. 4. Then explain that empathy can be the solution to this problem of helping discrimination. GROUP MEMBERSHIP (0/4 points) - 4 points; In class, we graded the Nier et al. (2001) article questions. The instructions for this assignment were to make the changes based on the feedback you received and include it as a paragraph here. Please review that document and make those changes, then add that paragraph. EMPATHY (0/4 points) - 4 points You were given detailed feedback for the Coke, Batson & McDavis (1978) Article Summary assignment. The instructions for this Introduction assignment were to make the changes based on the feedback you received and include the summary here. Please review that document and make those changes, then add that paragraph. HYPOTHESES (0/2 points) - 1 point; The instructions for this assignment state that before you state the specific hypothesis, you should try to pull this research together by summarizing why it is important to look at group membership and diffusion of responsibility in order to increase outgroup helping behavior (1-2 sentences). - 1 point; You were given the exact wording of the hypotheses in the introduction assignment. Please include it here. REFERENCES (0/4 points) You are missing a reference page. You should include references for the two articles you were assigned for this paper. CLARITY, SPELLING & APA (4.5/5 points) See the comment below.

I am likely to help the man shovel the snow so that he can take the mother to the hospital since this is an emergency case. I will be driven by empathy which is intended to understand the feelings and emotions while trying to experience objectively and rationally what another person feels. Empathy makes people help each other. It is closely related to altruism - love and concern for others - and the ability to help. I will help the man since I feel the pain or suffering, he is going through when I put myself in his place. This awakens the desire to help and act according to moral principles. A perfect online example that relates to the case is where a shopper at a supermarket who had spent all the money available in her pocket received a reprieve when a stranger decided to help her cater for the bill. The person showing empathy explained why her mother requested to find something else to do with his money and he thought helping out would be appropriate (Readers Digest (nd).

The ability to put yourself in the other's place, which develops through empathy, helps to understand better the behavior in certain circumstances and the way the other makes decisions. The empathic person is characterized by having affinities and identifying with another person (Bailey et al., 2020). It knows how to listen to others, understand their problems and emotions. When someone says "there was an immediate empathy between us," it means that there was a great connection, an immediate identification. Empathy is the opposite of antipathy since contact with the other person generates pleasure, joy and satisfaction. Empathy is a positive attitude that allows healthy relationships to be established, generating a better coexistence between individuals.