Edit Chapter 1 of dissertation

Edits needed

1. Chapter 1: The opening paragraph/statement should bring the reader into the topic.

2. Chapter 1: The background of the study/problem should frame the problem and identify the gaps and/or deficiencies from prior research. It is important to present why the study should be pursued and for whom the study is important.

3. Chapter 1: Background of the study is not adequate. Discussion should reflect why the research problem is of important social concern or theoretical interest.

4. Work on sentence clarity throughout the document. 

6. Chapter 1: The specific problem is not clear. 

7. Chapter 1: Identify a manageable, clearly defined research problem. 

8. Chapter 1: Population and sample discussion needs clarity. 

9. Chapter 1: Work on stronger alignment of the problem statement and purpose statement.

10. Chapter 1: Significance of study need more information. 

11. Chapter 1: You seem to be confused about what a research method is and what a research design is . . . work on that for clarity of the section on method and design. 

12. Chapter 1: Definition of terms – see comments on paper. 

13. Chapter 1: The limitations, delimitations, and summary need some work. – no improvement made since 8th feedback. 

14. Chapter 1: The summary should be a snapshot of the chapter. See comments on paper. 

Let me know if you have questions.