business plan

I have eight points to make and adjust accordingly:

1) follow this Table of Contents as you can & You can see the attachment - sample plan -  : 

I. Table of Contents 

I. Table of Contents 

II. Executive Summary 

III. General Company Description

IV. Products and Services 

V. Marketing Plan 

VI. Operational Plan 

VII. Management and Organization 

VIII. Personal Financial Statement 

IX. Startup Expenses and Capitalization

X. Financial Plan 

XI. Appendices 

XII. Refining the Plan 

2) Change the number of loan like this : 

The total cost of starting up the business is SAR 1,640,552 where the owner,

Mr. Ahmed will  provide SAR 1,235,161  . The remaining amount, which is will be funded  SAR 405,391 by loan  form bank.

3) Change name of owner from Mr. Ahmed TO Ms. Dania Ahmed.

4) Description and talk Repeater, please require explanation and more non-recurring details.  

5) Mentioned numbers such as pricing for subscriptions on average and so on. 

6) The situation is two to three years continuous and when the profit is.

7) Use Use the excel files in the attached financial numbers and add them in the plan.

The table is ready in the four attached Excel files. Just add the base numbers and calculate the rest of the table directly. Use realistic numbers not exaggerated.

8) What is the point ? (External groups are expected to raise about 25% of the total revenue of the establishment) I think it is inappropriate or incomprehensible and slightly overpriced!