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DUNYA (ST09019) by Dunya Al-brieki
Submission date: 20-Dec-2021 12:05AM (UTC+0400) Submission ID: 1733797200 File name: RP1-Dunya_albreiki_ST09019.docx (82.12K) Word count: 2596 Character count: 14217
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DUNYA (ST09019) ORIGINALITY REPORT
PRIMARY SOURCES
Submitted to College of Banking and Financial Studies Student Paper
FINAL GRADE
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DUNYA (ST09019) GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
Semester: Fall 2021-22
Module Title and Code: Research Project 1 (UG101- RP1)
Assessor: Vidya Suresh
The formative feedback is for Research Project -1, covering learning outcomes LO-1 to LO-6 (Refer module handbook). You are required to incorporate the feedback and submit in summative to obtain the final grade PASS/INCOMPLETE.
Feedback is provided on the surface of the document and at the end of the document. Go through your feedback and incorporate the suggested changes to improve your work.
1. Similarity
Similarity is below 20%. Good.
The similarity in references can be ignored.
Similarity within quotes with proper intext references can be ignored.
Similarity occurring due to standard template of the research proposal can also be ignored.
2. Academic Language
It is suggested to review your assignment with respect to grammar, sentence formatting and check the sequence before final submission.
Academic language is good.
You can give a spell check in your word document before going for summative submission.
Improve on formatting.
Use of technical words related to research project is encouraged.
3. Reference and bibliography
You have not used intext referencing appropriately. Check the Harvard referencing style for intext referencing.
Check for availability of intext references in the bibliography section that is end of reference section also.
Just cross check it before going for summative submission.
4. Coherence and structure of the assignment:
Entire project is well presented.
Introduction, literature review, methodology and the discussion chapters have come out well.
Methodology is explained well with focus on data collection, availability and appropriate method selected for the topic.
Overall, a good job. Improve on text referencing.
Submit it in summative/revision section. Grade will be given only when you submit the proposal in summative section.
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