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draft.docx ORIGINALITY REPORT
PRIMARY SOURCES
Thomas A. Brunner, Mathilde Delley, Christoph Denkel. "Consumers’ attitudes and change of attitude toward 3D-printed food", Food Quality and Preference, 2017 Publication
FINAL GRADE
15/0 draft.docx GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
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Comment 1
Provide a separate cover sheet with your name ans details and the assignment details and date.
Comment 2
You need to explain what the review is about first. What is your topic and how does it fit into marketing? Start very broad then begin to give some detail.
Comment 3
explain what the object is and what you are referring to in these sentences
Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.
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Comment 4
this is unclear. What attitude?
Confused You have used either an imprecise word or an incorrect word.
Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article the.
P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the active voice.
Comment 5
This whole paragraph is unclear. You need to clarify what you are discussing and explain the terms. It probably doesn't fit in the first part of your review which should be an introduction to your chosen concept.
Comment 6
Attitude of whom or what?
Article Error You may need to use an article before this word.
Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.
Sentence Cap. Review the rules for capitalization.
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Comment 7
state what the object is
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Comment 8
efficient and smooth what? Needs a noun.
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Sentence Cap. Review the rules for capitalization.
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Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.
Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article the.
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Article Error You may need to remove this article.
Garbled This sentence contains several grammatical or spelling errors that make your meaning unclear. Proofread the sentence to identify and fix the mistakes.
Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.
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Comment 9
towards
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considering
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environmentally
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reword this
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relevant atitudes
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Comment 15
explain this briefly
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leads
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Comment 18
this topic could be a whole paragraph
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P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the active voice.
Comment 19
examples would help
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Comment 20
and the
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Comment 21
You have followed the brief, but you really need to be more explicit in your discussion. Relate it to consumer decisions and marketing. Use examples and let the reader of your review understand just how it works in real situations, as you did withthe 3-D printed food.
Your introduction needs to put your concept in to the perspective of marketing and consumers. Start broad, and gradually move to the theories.
Create a reference list.
