READ PLEASE

 I see you’ve been busy!  Thank you for your deliverable 4 submission.  The feedback below corresponds to each section of the grading rubrics for this deliverable. 

  

Section 1:  Grade 4.  Perfect!  The main concept is clearly presented and centrally located on the concept map, including the selected condition and the population affected by the condition. You have demonstrated mastery in this section of the deliverable.   

Section 2:  Grade 1.  Please review and gain a better understanding of health disparities Then explain how they relate to pregnant women with malaria.  Health disparities impacting the population globally are clearly presented with a detailed description of how they support the main concept 

 Section 3:  Grade 2 .  Genetics and environment would be health determinants but you need to expand on that a little bit.  How does this relate to pregnant women with malaria?   At least three pertinent determinants of health are  presented in a way that supports the main concept. 

Section 4:  Grade 1.   At least three ethical considerations are clearly presented in a way that supports the main concept.  It is not clear what ethical standards you are speaking of and you have not indicated how this relates to pregnant women with malaria.  

Section 5:  Grade 2.  You have clearly presented three human rights but how do they relate to pregnant women with malaria? At least three human rights are clearly presented in a way that supports the main concept. 

something to keep in mind is that every section always has to tie back into your main topic (in this case pregnant women with malaria).  You have 2 more attempts for this deliverable.