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September 15, 2016 Ms. Julie Hayes 212 Maple Road Fillmore, IL 48799 Dear Julie:

Congratulations! I am pleased to tell you that you won the Outdoor Designs kite competition! Your Striped Hawk kite received the highest scores from our judges. The following prizes will be shipped to you separately:

 A check for $250

 Outdoor Designs Kite Master’s Toolkit

 Set of binoculars

 Kite Crafter’s Variety Pack (by Flyin’ Falcon Kites, Inc.) Your Striped Hawk kite will also be featured in the Outdoor Designs newsletter The Hammer as well as on our website. Your kite received extremely positive comments from our panel of judges, including this one: “The Striped Hawk is an example of true craftsmanship!” Congratulations, Julie! Sincerely, Your Name

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