Philosophy

Critical Essay Comments

a. Proofread: Check for spelling grammar and syntax errors.

b. Avoid Vague Writing: This includes broad generalizations, repetitive statements, and unnecessary or off-topic information.

c. Improve Organization: Make sure that your introduction is concise and direct, and that the body of your essay has a coherent structure.

d. Clarify Thesis: Directly state your position and give a brief rationale for why you will argue this position..

e. Provide Necessary Background Information: Do not assume your reader knows about the topic. Consider what information you must include so that the various positions one might take with regard to this topic are clear.

f. Avoid False Statements: Make sure you understand the argument of any philosopher you discuss. Do state anything factually untrue, or highly questionable.

g. Explain Quotations: Whenever using a direct quote, be sure to explain why this quote is important.

h. Provide Citation: Any quotation or paraphrase should be accompanied by a citation including the author’s last name and the page number.

i. Clarify Justification: You should provide at least 2-3 reasons in support of your thesis. Be sure to adequately explain these reasons! Don’t just state them without any discussion.

j. Be Consistent: Do not contradict your thesis!

k. Respond to Objections: Consider the strongest objections someone might pose to your thesis.