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Criterion Feedback – areas needing revision

Characteristics Section

Nice work identifying health status issues within the community that impact the population groups; try to include more demographic data (ages, races, immigration, ethnic groups, languages, homeless, genders...etc) and socioeconomic information (poverty level, employment rate..etc) 

Assessment Local

You have a nice start to this assessment; remember not to focus on one population group or health issue; give an overall assessment of examples of local resources that support the varying demographics of the community

Assessment Regional

Try to include a variety of examples of local resources within the community and discuss how influences on these resources differ from those on the local resources (funding or policy?)

Assessment Local and Regional

For this section include specific examples of healthcare policy that influence both local and regional resources and support with evidence 

Assessment Resource

You did a nice job discussing the local and regional resources that influence the elderly population- make sure to include resources that impact other population groups as well and support with data and evidence 

Assessment Strengths and Weaknesses

You did a nice job discussing strengths and weaknesses that would impact a health strategy plan and implementation- give specific examples and evidence that these are found within this community 

Which Intervention

Great job connecting the level of prevention within each intervention; make sure to justify each level with evidence 

Strategies

Great job; try to elaborate more on how your plan ensures the target population participation

Community Health Strategy

Great job! You might include any national policies or programs that align with your plan as well.

Articulation of Response

Your paper was well written, concise, and organized- wonderful job! Make sure to include an all inclusive introduction and conclusion