Final
Criterion Feedback – areas needing revision
Characteristics Section
Nice work identifying health status issues within the community that impact the population groups; try to include more demographic data (ages, races, immigration, ethnic groups, languages, homeless, genders...etc) and socioeconomic information (poverty level, employment rate..etc)
Assessment Local
You have a nice start to this assessment; remember not to focus on one population group or health issue; give an overall assessment of examples of local resources that support the varying demographics of the community
Assessment Regional
Try to include a variety of examples of local resources within the community and discuss how influences on these resources differ from those on the local resources (funding or policy?)
Assessment Local and Regional
For this section include specific examples of healthcare policy that influence both local and regional resources and support with evidence
Assessment Resource
You did a nice job discussing the local and regional resources that influence the elderly population- make sure to include resources that impact other population groups as well and support with data and evidence
Assessment Strengths and Weaknesses
You did a nice job discussing strengths and weaknesses that would impact a health strategy plan and implementation- give specific examples and evidence that these are found within this community
Which Intervention
Great job connecting the level of prevention within each intervention; make sure to justify each level with evidence
Strategies
Great job; try to elaborate more on how your plan ensures the target population participation
Community Health Strategy
Great job! You might include any national policies or programs that align with your plan as well.
Articulation of Response
Your paper was well written, concise, and organized- wonderful job! Make sure to include an all inclusive introduction and conclusion