English/psyc
specialagent16
creativewritingexerciseBrevitymagazine.pdf
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Annotation Notes 1. Excellent! Now, be sure the piece does not take on the tone of an academic essay too much. 2. Close the gap between paragraphs. 3. Excellent, clean writing in this piece, Travis! However, consider how the essay can incorporate a
point/purpose/agenda that points toward greater social/cultural/universal commentary. Be sure to avoid the academic tone and work in the creative elements of fiction, as well.
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