Project2 #2

Pick one piece of feedback from your peers on Eli Review, quote it, and tell us how you'll respond/revise. Be concrete! Provide examples/evidence. This'll help you start to write your cover letter.

To do so, use the template below to write a paragraph:

“Peer-review increased the effectiveness of my essay by having me focus on/think about.... To be clear, my peer, <insert name here> wrote: “provide a quotation.” Consequently, I have made the following changes.... Thus, my essay is more effective thanks to peer-review.”

Again, be concrete! Provide examples/evidence of feedback *and* revisions!

After completing the above paragraph, you should be able to copy and paste it into your cover letter. Also, it should give you a model for all of your analysis paragraphs in the cover letter!