Speech/ Cover letter for job

Prashant Khadka

9340 Greenville Ave

Dallas, TX 75243

6822103357

[email protected]

October 4, 2019

Mr. Bill Gates

Microsoft Corporation

390 North Street

Silicon Valley, CA 94027

Dear Mr. Gates,

I am writing this letter in my wake of landing the data analyst job in your company following

the advertisement for the position on the company’s website.

I have studied computer science and have dealt with data analysis for a long time. I am

familiar with data management and crunching. I would like to take the opportunity of the

position of a data analyst in the company in order to develop my career as a data analyst. I

have exceptional computer and mathematical skills. I have ample knowledge of using several

data analysis software and systems such as Stata, Excel, LIPs, MATLAB and SPSS.

From my study in statistics, I have found it interesting to manipulate and analyse data. I have

been drawn to the determination of relationships between variables and numbers. I am also

driven by the urge to providing the best analysis to decision-makers and help them make

informed decisions in their departments. I am committed to taking an organization to the next

level by using my ability to analyse big data and simplify it to my supervisor and the sales

team.

Data analysis has helped me to become an organized, detail-oriented, and precise during my

work. I love working as a team in order to increase my data analysis skills. I am an effective

communicator ready to listen attentively and provide feedback on time.

Please find my contact information at the top of this letter. I am grateful for the time you have

dedicated to reading this letter. Please let me know if an interview is ready.

Sincerely

Prashant Khadka Prashant Khadka

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Comment Summary Page 1

1. A few things with the address: Put a . after Ave. since it's an abbreviation. Remove the excess spaces that make it so stretched out down the page. Remove the hyperlink from your email address.

i. Also put dashes between your phone number xxx-xxx-xxxx 2. I'm not sure what you mean here. "in my way of landing the job" - are you assuming you already have the job

there? Why are you applying for a job you already have? I think you need to change this phrase to indicate that you WANT this job and say why.

3. number crunching? 4. We'll talk more about this issue, but avoid saying you want the job because of how it will help you. Employers

want to hear how you can help them, not the other way around. 5. great paragraph 6. put a comma after Sincerely,